The teller leaned back slightly so she could see exactly
what she expected: a middle-aged man in the back office, crying softly into his
sleeve as the bank managers tough hands attempted some reassuring pats on the
man’s back. When the door opened and the
bank manager walked out, she hurriedly began shuffling through the papers
sitting in front of her, making brief eye contact with the manager as he
hurriedly walked past, giving her a sly smile and a wink. She blushed, feeling the heat rising against
her cheeks. In the back office, the man
continued to sob quietly.
It was nearly ten minutes later when the man came out of
the back office, eyes still red and his cheeks still stained with the tears of
despair. He made no eye contact with any
of the tellers or customers, giving only a cursory nod to the security guard
standing by the front door, who swung the doors outward. Inside, the bank remained unchanged, its
customers standing in a close line waiting in front of the counter, statements
and signed slips of paper clenched in their hands.
Outside, amongst the heat radiating from the blacktop,
adding to the muggy nature of the day, the middle-aged man, his brow streaked
with sweat, sat inside a small sedan.
There was no noise coming from within the car; the man sat, staring
blankly forward, still perspiring in the oppressive heat inside of his smallish
car. It was a full five minutes before
he turned the engine on, and let the fog of cold air radiate out of the
vents. He sat in the car, the engine
running, as the tears began to well up in his eyes again. He gave himself enough time to regain his
composure, before backing the car out across the hot blacktop. The traffic was heavy; it neared the end of
the workday and the streets were filled with commuters running errands and
returning to their homes. After waiting
at a red light for what felt like an eternity, the middle-aged man drove his
car into the blended flow of commuters.
The subdivision lacked gates; that variety was across the
expansive commercial area that had grown seemingly overnight. Those were the more prestigious houses: the
lawyers, doctors, and the like, growing tired of the constant headache of urban
life, flocking into the suburbs, but deciding to segregate themselves from the
original inhabitants. The subdivisions
without gates were the heraldry of the middle class; the man, like many of his
neighbors, had moved his family to this subdivision a decade ago seeking a
safer environment. He paused once inside
the subdivision proper, seeing a newly sold house sitting at the top of the
main road towards his own home. He had
passed by it daily, but now just noticed how much it had changed since he last
remembered it. There was a new, vibrant
coat of paint drawn across the front; he had remembered a drab yellow, now a
soothing light blue accented by white trim across the doors and windows. There was a white wooden fence across the front,
where he had never remembered a fence before.
His car sat next to the curb, and he stared in wonder at the house, drawn
into its own nature. Two small children,
a boy and a girl, ran behind the fence while their mother watched from the
front steps. He sighed, and a smile
crept across his face, until he continued driving home.
A yellow sheet of paper was stuck on the door of the
house next door. The man didn’t need to
stop to read what it meant, taking stock of the unkempt yard and broken
windows, courtesy of the neighborhood children.
The subdivision was a boomtown a few years ago, now, quickly becoming a ghost
town. It was not the first yellow tag
the man saw, and he knew, deep down in the pit of his stomach that it wouldn’t
be the last. He drove on, focusing on
the road, and not on the houses around him, the tears welling up in his eyes
again.
He pulled slowly into his driveway, killing the engine
and sitting motionless for a few minutes before walking out onto the pavement. He could faintly smell his wife beginning to
cook dinner, and from behind the house, the faint laughter of his children
playing. As he approached the house, he
screwed his face into a caricature of happiness: his frown twisted up to a
smile, betrayed by the look in his eyes.
Before he could even open the door himself, his wife came out, and
greeted him; he initial enthusiasm faded when she saw the look in his eyes, and
took his hands and led him in.
Across the street, the only other person visible was
sitting on the top step leading up to a modest home. In his early 20s, the young man stared across
the street at the sight of the man and his wife talking in the window of their
living room. He took a sip of coffee out
of the mug sitting next to him before leaning his back against the top of the
stairs. He stared up at the clouds as
they began to turn orange in the evening sky.
Across the street, the sound of crying could be heard.
I do wonder what's going off with the man. You've got me interested with yet another well written piece. It's always great to see something of yours as well :)
ReplyDeleteOh my. This was rather bleak and depressing. :(
ReplyDeleteVery mood building! You've definitely got me hooked! Can't wait to see what happens next (if anything!)
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