Took nearly two months off from writing following the completion of National Novel Writing Month (the work itself is still unfinished. My plan is to return to it by the end of the month). I wrote two different things over the past couple of weeks: one is something written for something a friend of mine is working on, and the other is this little thing below, inspired by something someone told me in a bar.
Everyone
was surprised by the fact that in the end, he was always a nice kid. Those faults seemed to melt away whenever
anyone saw that broken dejected smile that just seemed to exude niceness any
time that he spoke or apologized for something wrong that seemed to do on a
regular basis. It was crooked from years
of sub par dental work that seemed to primarily affect anyone whose attitudes
were just the right amount of terrible and enlightening. The young man flashed that smile at the
oncoming traffic as he wandered through the town during the early hours of
nightfall one Friday night, the lights behind the high school illuminating the
slow, creeping cloud cover that had begun to follow the mild West wind in. He was excited, watching the parade of cars
turn on Main Street and up the solitary hill, down the other side, and wind
their way to the high school to the annual rivalry game.
The
high school football team was on the verge of a playoff berth, the first
opportunity in decades, leaving the town into a near frenzy when one
enterprising football coach determined that they would be playing their
neighboring rivals to determine who would get the opportunity to represent the
conference in the playoffs, and potentially get a shot at the state
championship. That near frenzy had been
growing over the course of the week, ending with two students being arrested
for attempting to steal and deface their rival's mascot statue. They were heralded as heroes when they
returned to school the next day, so far as to be mentioned by the captain of
the football team during a pep rally.
The
young man had not attended the pep rally: he was freshly graduated in the
spring and wanted nothing to do with his Alma Mater. It did not matter, as a storm of crimson and
gold had descended over the town, marking it in the town's coat of arms. As he wandered down main street, he noticed
the deserted quality that had descended upon the town as each car turned up
main street, up the hill, and towards the lights that illuminated the east side
of the town at that moment. Nearly all
of Main Street was a ghost town: the shops that hadn't been closed for years
were dark, with only the dials of electronics inside betraying any sort of
warmth. The lone exception was the bar:
as he walked past, the young man could see a small group huddled around a
solitary television set that was tuned to the regional cable access channel,
which was presenting live coverage of the game.
Bathed in the glow of the television, the barflies usually listless eyes
had a quality of life to the suddenly.
The young man stopped along his walk to stare into the window for a few
minutes before continuing his walk, all the way down to the near-vacant strip
mall on the edge of tow
The
strip mall was pushed forward by the youngest member of the town council; he
was a self-styled 'real estate mogul' who owned the only two apartment
buildings in the 500-soul town, along with the lease on the restaurant. He had convinced the aging members of the
council that the town needed to invest in real estate to grow and make it a
viable community choice in the greater metropolitan area: after much
deliberation they agreed. Two years
later, only two businesses occupied space in the building. The liquor store had moved from its old
location to a new, larger space to deal with an increased demand for cheap
alcohol that was being supplied during the onset of the recession. Its beer cooler was hardly full of prominent
brews: Busch and Busch Lite were the most popular, along with Budweiser as a
close second. The thought of the
desperate occupants of the town swilling their crappy beer made the young man
grit his teeth and felt his stomach roil in protest. He stared into the plate glass windows,
looking for any sort of blinking light.
When he didn't see any, he carefully placed his bag on the ground before
reaching into his jacket and removing a slightly undersized baseball bat that
was concealed in. He looked about, his
head darting from side to side like a wary lizard darting through the desert
sands before bringing the club down with deft force on the glass. It cracked in a spider web pattern that
maintained some level of integrity, requiring the young man to kick out the
glass from the door frame with his boots.
It came crashing inward nearly whole, and he crept through the frame of
the door, pausing to unlock it. The
store was a cornucopia of alcohol: bottles of various colors lined the shelves
and placards designated the cost. He
jumped the counter and began to gather the most expensive of the bottles that
were hidden back there, only available by request. He stuffed these into his backpack, carefully
wrapping them in paper bags to minimize clinking. He then moved through the store,
intentionally scrutinizing each bottle before selecting the highest proof
bottles that he could. They were piled
into the middle of the room before transferred into an old shopping cart,
clearly stolen from the old grocery market that occupied the corner two blocks away. He piled the high proof liquors into it,
before grabbing his bat from where he left it, right on the counter next to the
cash register. He took it in his hand,
tightening his grip until his knuckles turned white. He then brought it down hard on the register,
causing the plastic machine to spring upon and reveal its bounty. He pulled the drawer out, and set it on the
counter before picking up the machine and throwing it into a nearby shelf,
hitting bottles of moderately priced, domestic wine that exploded in a cascade
of broken glass and red liquor that covered the carpet. The register, the cheap piece of machinery
that it was, exploded in fragments of plastic as the thin carpet did nothing to
cushion it. The young man smirked and
tightened his grip on the bat again. After he had successfully demolished the
bottles of liquor, causing the entire store to reek with the smell of them, he
gathered up the cash drawer and the shopping cart and walked into the parking
lot. He grabbed one of high-proof
liquors, opened the bottle with crack against the pavement, and poured the
contents out over the drawer, soaking the bills in the potent alcohol. He carried a blank, emotionless expression as
he lit a match and dropped, watching the bills burn underneath the fall sky.
His eyes darted around again as the paper burned and the coins grew hot before
settling on a monstrosity of a car that was sitting in the parking lot. He scrutinized it, noticing the sun-aged for
sale sign in the window before walking up to it and trying the door. It was locked, but the bat broke through the
passenger-side window with ease, allowing him to unlock the car and climb into
the driver's seat. He ran his hands
through the glove box and around the dashboard before an errant flip of the
visor revealed exactly what he had hope for: an extra pair of keys, hidden in
nearly plain sight. He popped the trunk
and loaded the booze from the shopping cart into it, before firing up the
engine in a loud, unruffled roar and screeching out of the parking lot, taking
care to run over the burning register drawer, sending ash and plastic debris
through the air and across the parking lot.
The tires screeched across the pavement and out into the road, as the
young man tightened his grip on the wheels, listening to the loud exhaust and
the clinking of bottles from the backseat.
It did
not take him long to find what he was looking for, as he careened through the
abandoned streets as fast and loud as he dared.
The playground that solemnly hung on the edge of town appeared deserted
at first glance, but as his headlights illuminated the ill-maintained play set,
he could count several figures hunched over, the lights of their cigarettes
barely visible as they tried to conceal them.
They were the only other people that the young man knew he would encounter. When they realized that it was not an
authority figure, their demeanor relaxed as they stared at the newcomer. He opened his backpack, smiling his crooked
smile as he revealed the contents. The
kids gathered around him, all five of them looking intently at the bounty he
had gathered. He passed out the top
shelf bottles, continually smiling as each of the highschoolers marveled at the
names and the price stickers that adorned each one. When the bottles had been removed, the young
man took off without another word, climbing into the car and roaring back out
of the park. The kids left behind
started opening the bottles, taking gleeful swigs of the liquor inside and
talking excitedly. No longer needing to go anywhere in particular, the young
man decided to transform the streets of the town into his own personal
demolition derby track. Each turn tested
the limits of the cars handling, and the old machine was not up to the
challenge. It careened into the light
posts and parked car, while the driver laughed every time he scraped alongside
of something. The path of destruction
that the young man carved was clearly visible: anything that could be destroyed
without risking completely destroying the vehicle. Every sign post was another nail as he slammed
into them, twisting the metal underneath what was left of the bumper. He finally over did it, a few blocks away
from the high school in the "newest" part of the town, where the
long, winding roads gave way to houses that were new over two decades ago. He collided with a bright red SUV, which spun
him into a nearby yard where one of his tires sunk into the soft earth. He slammed down on the gas pedal, but the
tire just kept sinking with each revolution.
After several minutes of revving the engine in futility, he gave up and
turned off the ignition before popping the trunk.
The
streetlights were caught in each drop of liquid as the high-proof bottles was
opened and poured throughout the car: the trunk, the backseat, the front seats,
and the dashboard were all soaked and the odor of the strong spirits was
overpowering, causing the young man to pull his shirt over his mouth as he
moved inside the car, carefully ensuring that every drop was not wasted and
that the cloth seats in particular go the most attention. When he was satisfied with the job, he looked
down the streets to see whether or not anyone was moving around. All he could pick up on was the soft glow of
a television set twinkling through the curtains of the house across the
street. He knew that the widow there had
not heard the sounds of crashing as he tore down the street: her hearing was
too bad and her television was too loud to be able to hear a knock at the door
or the sound of her doorbell ringing. He
knew that she might notice what happened next, and the thought of that made him
shudder in anticipation. He smiled that
devious, crooked smile before lighting the last of his matches and throwing
them through the windows of the car, one right after another. When the fire roared to life inside of the
vehicle, he stared at it for a few moments before running through the yards and
zigzagging across streets, just barely suppressing gleeful laughter as he
breathed heavy. The football game was near the end when the volunteer fire
department heard the alarm go off, signaling a fire. They rushed out of the bleachers as the
spectators turned their attention, causing many of the players to do the
same. At that moment, the quarterback
miscounted the snap and it was released prematurely into his hands, causing a
fumble that was recovered by the rival team's huge nose guard. The crowd shouted, and everyone stopped
paying attention to the men who had left and started berating the players with
boos and yells of discontent. On the
field, the quarterback, a remarkable freshman, looked as if he might cry when
he saw his father booing him along with the crowd, regardless of the seventeen
point lead. The volunteer firemen could see the smoke from the stadium, but
still had to drive a mile to the station to get all their gear: in oversight,
they had left just a single person at the station, who had begun to ready the
gear in a breakneck pace which was not nearly fast enough. That delay cost them dearly, as the young man's
placement of the car was nearly perfect, causing the firemen to drive the
length of the town twice. The police
officer who was on duty arrived right away from where he was watching the
football game, keeping his squad car running nearly the entire time. However, all he could do was stand away from
the car and watch as the fire kept burning through it. He attempted to cordon off the street, but
the few people who were not attending the game stood huddled around watching it
burn until the fire crews showed up and began dousing it in water. It never exploded, but was not much more than
a burned out husk of metal surrounded by a black ring of grass and melting
vinyl siding from the football coach's house.
A few blocks away, the final whistles blew and the crowd roared as they
had clinched victory by a ten point margin. When the field had emptied, the
crowd converged around the remains of the burning car. The volunteer fireman has saturated it with
water, but the remaining smoke beckoned out to everyone who was leaving the
game and not journeying to the pizza parlor to celebrate with the team or to
the bar to boast about past football glories and try to forget the years of
disappointment. The gathered crowd had
silently agreed to not to inform the coach of the conflagration that h ad been
put out on his front lawn and caused his lawn to blacken and his vinyl siding
to melt. He had larger things to concern
himself with, and at that moment, not a soul in the town wanted to spoil his
victory against their arch-rivals and his former mentor. It caused a quiet murmur to rise when the
officer had called in the county sheriff to cordon off the wreckage while he
went to the pizza parlor to wait to talk to the coach when the celebration to
died down. He sat there in the parking
lot with his squad car running, watching the festivities unfold. He had the computer on, and was searching
through for some sort of lead.
Inside, the
head coach was talking excitedly about boosters and his assistants while his
players ate pizza and laughed amongst themselves. He noticed some of the senior players had
already slipped out, but seeing the squad car in the parking lot, he was
certain that there was no way that his boys could get into trouble
tonight. He had already began strategizing,
having his coaches pull up rival teams in their phones and attempt to locate
videos that had been posted of star players and big plays. Once it started, the avalanche could not be
contained, and the man's mind began turning and processing at a breakneck speed
to ensure that when it was time to play against these teams, all from larger
schools, that his boys would be ready.
He did not notice when the officer's squad car speed off out of the
parking lot and down the street to the strip mall, where a booster's liquor
store had been vandalized.
The officer
stood amid the wreckage and felt the strong smell of alcohol sting his nostrils
as he wiped a finger along a counter and licked it to taste the whiskey that
been broken over it. He knelt down to
look at shards of broken glass, trying to look a professional as possible but
realizing that all he could see was broken glass and spilt booze. He stifled a sigh as he remembered the owner
was standing behind him, calling his insurance company and loudly complaining
that he was on hold. The officer nodded,
making a few scrawls in his notebook before walking outside. He noticed the remains of the cash drawer,
which were strewn around the parking lot. He initially thought was that he was
looking at a robbery, and that the perpetrator had simply broken up all of the
shit because he could. However, seeing the charred coins and the few half-burnt
bills, he realized that this was probably just an act of vandalism. As he squatted on the asphalt looking at the
tire marks left behind, he started thinking harder about what had really
happened that night, and who may have actually been to blame. He poked at a charred five dollar bill with
his index finger and watched the burned portion crumble to charcoal under his
touch. He walked back into the store and
asked more questions of the owner as he waited on hold on his insurance
company’s 24-7 hotline. It would be an
hour before he got through, and he became more and more irate with each passing
minute.
The
post-game celebration at the pizza parlor was in full swing, as many of the
adults began to drink, as the intensity of conversations turned toward
excitement. The entire town seemed like
it had coalesced into two locations: the bar and the pizza parlor. From outside of the latter, the young man
stood looking through the giant, plate glass windows the marked the building,
adorned with brightly painted letters denoting the name of the
establishment. Behind the red-checked
curtains, he could see the crowds of people talking and laughing, pointing at
players who were still present and motioning wildly about the game like they
were in the middle of some sort of violent seizure. The young man reached into his backpack, and
felt his hand tighten over the cut down stock of the .22 rifle that he had
modified the day before. He drew it out,
the stock cut down to a crude pistol grip, covered in coarse tape to ease the
feel against the rough wood. The
magazine that he attached to it was massive, a drum full of shells that he had
loaded into it after he had finished the makeshift grip. It made a satisfying click sound when it was
loaded, and as soon as he thumbed off the safety, he began pulling the trigger
as fast as he could into the window, that crooked grin on his face the entire
time.
The
courtroom was quiet as the judge sat there, contemplating his words. He stared down at the young man as he sat in
the blue outfit that designated him as a prisoner at the county lock-up. His lawyer sat next to him, a young woman in
a pale grey pantsuit, attempting to look intimidating, but coming across as
clearly overwhelmed by the case and the fact that her client had refused to
take the stand earlier and had her change his plea to guilty at the conclusion
of the trial. She was looking over
papers and her phone, waiting for something that she could use. It seemed like it was going to be a harsh
conviction: he had hit two people in the restaurant, through ricochets of
bullets as he fired upward through the windows and into the ceiling. They were both minors, however: star football
players who had been sidelined by their injuries which many believed to be the
reason that the team lost in such spectacular fashion in the first round of the
playoffs. It had caused the town to come
down on the young man with a ferocity and aggression that no one expected. He received threatening letters in jail, and
the town collectively seemed like they wanted to see him hang from some
makeshift gallows in the middle of town by the pale morning light. As the judge sat there, deliberating silently
to himself as to what the sentence would be, he twiddled his moustache and
looked down at the young man as he sat behind the table, his hands cuffed in
front of him and his eyes staring passively at the state seal as it hung on the
left side of the courtroom, away from the judge and the spot where the jury had
previously been sitting before being dismissed after the plea was changed to
guilty.
The
young man had every opportunity to speak but declined at every turn to do so.
His defense lawyer, who had created a vast array of character witnesses to
validate the perception that the young man was merely misunderstood and deep
down, carried the potential for redemption and rehabilitation. The prosecution’s witnesses sat in the back,
and decried him with every breath they could, laughing in joyous concert when
the plea was changed and the judge decided that since it had changed, he was
perfectly content to hand down the young man's sentence. The only modification was the attempted
murder charges that initially cropped up after he had been arrested and while
the young man was waiting in the county lockup for the trial. It had been negotiated by his defense
attorney, and assault with a deadly weapon was applied in its case: both of the
athletes who had been struck by the bullets had only been struck accidentally
from ricochets, when it became apparent that the young man had no desire to
physically injure anyone. The judge sat
there, looking over these facts while the condemned sat in his seat. The Judge had already deliberated slowly by
himself, without even removing himself from the room as he sat there, staring
at the young man who made no eye contact with him or any of the witnesses, just
fixed his gaze on the state seal that hung in the courtroom. At the end, he asked the young man to rise,
and gave his two cents on the matter, believing that the young man still had
hope for redemption: he was, as the judge put it, a "good kid at
heart."
Good way to describe a sociopath. I like it.
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